Talk:Tunlands

Hello,

In regards to my add in on the Tunlands page beginning with; The Tun Marshes', as per the name given to the mid river swamplands on the Tun River.

All given and derived from Elminster's Ecologies, Forgotten Realms Playing Pack sold for AD&D 3rd Addition, game system in the mid 1990's.

I don't know if there is a wiki covering it, but I would hope one emerges. ;)

--Adwulf of Tun (talk) 02:11, February 20, 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi! Thanks for getting involved and contributing to the wiki. There's a few technical problems here that I'll explain. I'll give you a shot at fixing them yourself, else one of the more experienced editors can come in and work on them later.


 * First, the Tunlands are a larger region than just the Marshes, and the lore on the Tun Marsh / Marshes of Tun is a extensive enough that we can have a full, separate article on them. So please feel free to build a new article at Marsh of Tun. Just click on the link, write, and publish. Take a look at Vast Swamp and Flooded Forest for some other wetlands articles than you can use as a suitable template.


 * You have a bit of a problem with grammar and punctuation, so be careful with this. Please also write in past tense (that is, from the perspective of a long time afterwards). A trickier problem is the wiki coding. Look at other articles to see how they're written and coded, and try to follow the format we've set. If you do have problems with these, one of us will come by and fix them for you later.


 * From a skim over Elminster's Ecologies, the bit about Thaalim, Thylash and Khyssaria doesn't appear as you wrote it. As far as we know, they're only renegade sorcerers working for Thaalim, and nothing else, and nothing more known. Please don't add your own embellishments. As a wiki, we only cover information just as it appears in the official, canonical lore. After all, we may find an adventure dealing with them in a different way, or a DM reading this may have a different idea. So please only write what appears in the lore.


 * We have a fiddly citation system, but it produces nice results. For your work, trying including:


 * where X is the page number(s). Then add:

==References==
 * at the bottom of the page. This would produce the following:

Blah Skurge blah.


 * So, I hope this advice is useful to you. Ask any of us if you have any questions or problems. Thanks again for having a go. — BadCatMan (talk) 02:56, February 20, 2013 (UTC)