Talk:Sundabar

NPOV
In my opinion the word "mighty" is biased towards promoting the subject of the article and should be substituted or removed. I am in two minds about the term "dwarven-born" because it doesn't really accurately account the process of creating a fortress. Fw190a8 16:27, 28 July 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for making those changes. I think it reads a lot more neutral now! Fw190a8 22:12, 28 July 2007 (UTC)

Major update needed
A good deal of this article needs editing. In the Sword Coast Adventurer's Guide, in the section devoted to the city, it's noted that the human population of Sundabar had been killed during the War of Silver Marches, and that the city is once again a city of dwarves. If no one takes up my request and edits this article to reflect that, I well, but I'd like someone else to do it since my natural writing style does not reflect the tone of this wiki and the lead in will need to be changed.GM_3826 (talk) 19:18, March 29, 2017 (UTC)