Talk:Martyred champion of Ilmater

This is my first attempt at creating an article for class, and trying to lay out a modern style for FRW. I followed the format used by other prestige class pages, and tried to expand on it. I think I may have gone a bit too far in attempting to convert the crunch into fluff. Is it too obvious, or not obvious enough? — BadCatMan (talk) 12:52, August 30, 2013 (UTC)


 * I'm not familiar with the source, but that seems to strike a good balance between crunch and fluff, giving descriptions of the feats, etc. I just try to avoid phrases like "saving throw" and "level", but I'm not going to hunt them down and rephrase them all. I think we agreed that distances, weights, and quantities were acceptable crunchy details? I'm not sure what you left out of this article, but it reads well. &mdash;Moviesign (talk) 14:26, August 30, 2013 (UTC)


 * I tried to avoid mention of crunchy things, like feat, saving throw, supernatural ability, and so on, and tried to describe the flavour and theme of them instead. "Damage reduction" was a bit difficult, but I went with it since I had the other ability names.
 * Yes, measurements of real-world quantities aren't crunch. — BadCatMan (talk) 12:13, August 31, 2013 (UTC)