User talk:Gem Hound

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Welcome and advice
Hi Gem Hound.

Welcome to the wiki and thanks for your contributions. I hope you decide to stick around. Please have a look at the above welcome notice for some general tips and polices to see how we do things.

For some advice, please get to know the Preview button. Don't make a change, then publish to see what happened, then make another change, and repeat, on and on. That just fills up the edit histories and activity pages with dozens of minor changes, and makes it very hard for us to see what you did and fix it up. Instead, use Preview to see what the result is without publishing, so you can easily undo it and go back or make a new change, then save the final result. Another technique is to write your article in a separate program like Word before copying the final product to the wiki.

Please also make sure you use the correct references on an article. I spent some time looking through Dragon #255 for mongrelman, when it was actually #242.

We all make mistakes in this, especially starting out, and that's fine. Just slow down, take your time. I recommend making one article at a time, then waiting to give the rest of us a chance to look it over, make revisions, and offer advice like this, then use what you learn for the next article.

Anyway, once again, welcome aboard! — BadCatMan (talk) 03:51, November 18, 2015 (UTC)


 * Please also remember to use the Information template when uploading images. The Upload Photo page should tell you everything you need to do. You should also add categories, from Category:Images and so on. — BadCatMan (talk) 04:03, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, thanks for cleaning up my mess. I'm currently working on upgrading the Aldani page and would really like for you to add in your input. I have doubled the references and am slowly adding to it, I've so far added stats, tried to condense the references a little by book instead of page(since there are about 8 book references - still have pages listed), I've also added history I found on the wiki on the timeline that pertained to them. I've decided to combine crabmen and lobster men on the same page there since both are Yurians. Any help would be thoroughly appreciated!

Note: I'm still not done with the mongrelmen either. — Gem Hound(talk)


 * (I like to keep conversations together, so I moved your response back to your page.)
 * Thank you, I started the aldani page a few years ago, though just to rehabilitate a copied article. I had no idea what they were. It's nice to see it grow like this.
 * On references, just add as many as you know of. It gives a reader multiple choices of book to look up, as they probably won't have all of them. Make sure that all statements have a reference, and that all references that apply are applied.
 * Combining two/three different-named creatures like that requires some explanation: it may just be that different designers independently thought of crab-people, but they might be very different in concept. The 3e yurians and 2e crabmen share the same lore, so must be the same creature with a new name. I'm not certain about the aldani/lobster-men, as the lore is rather different, but it doesn't actually contradict, so I would accept it. Consider adding a note of explanation in the appendix of the article. — BadCatMan (talk) 06:48, November 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * I have linked them together since Forgotten Realms campaign books call lobster men Yurians, while the crabmen in Second Edition look identical and share the same lore with Yurians in Third Edition. Lobstermen do not exist in any D&D edition, while crabmen do. Crabmen are barely referenced in the realms(only one reference), while Lobster men/Aldani are heavily referenced as presiding in the Jungles of Chult.
 * Yes, and I am adding every reference I can find, especially ones that were not there such as the Monstrous Compendium and Dragon Magazine. The authour, namely you, did have one reference that I found was just about two or three sentences about them in the Serpent Kingdoms book.
 * I am doing what I can to flesh out Tellectus first, and for me that also means fleshing out its occupants at the same time(so that means all the links in Tellectus and their sub links are being worked on by me unless they are already finished like illithid or svirfneblin). I'm eventually getting more organized with my contributions though and I FOUND THE PREVIEW BUTTON!. It seems that you didn't have to change much yet with the Yurians as of yet, but I still have much to add to their page. Once I'm satisfied with how these pages have turned out, I'll move on to the Tlincallis of Oaxaptupa.Gem Hound (talk) 22:57, November 18, 2015 (UTC)


 * We know yurians and crab-men and we know aldani are lobster-men. However, we can't say for sure that yurians/crab-men are aldani/lobster-men. After all, crabs and lobsters are different animals, so these creatures could well be different too.


 * Please note this: use past tense. Always write from the perspective that things happened in the past. It makes adding later lore and changes to the lore easier in the future.


 * Also, try not to extrapolate, guess, or make-up information. Focus only on what is known from the sources. For example, at mozgriken, I had to remove quite a bit. First, halfing ceremorphosis was not mentioned (you never know, a half-illithid halfling might be a thing somewhere). Second, it's not yet known if mozgriken are in Oryndoll; those in Tellectus were most likely made in Tellectus. Third, I don't know what you meant by mozgriken being left to their own devices, as Dragon #255 said nothing of the kind.


 * Word of advice: focus on one project and one article at a time. It'll save you missing lore and help you write a better, more focused article. As you're new here, I'm checking and fact-checking everything you do, and jumping between mozgriken, mongrelman, and yurian is confusing the hell out of me and my books. — BadCatMan (talk) 11:07, November 19, 2015 (UTC)


 * We also know that lobster men and aldani are yurians, due to The Jungles of Chult calling them yurians. I've also been trying my best to write in past tense, I'm most used to writing in current tense.
 * A ceremorph is another name for a half-illithid. The reason is is that half-illithid go through ceremorphosis to be created, and ceremorphs are also created in the same way. It is an interchangable word for the same thing. A ceremorph is a half-illithid. The only exception is in humans, where full illithid get formed with illithid larva implantation, aka ceremorphosis. Illithid cannot and would not reproduce with other species, just force to recreate themselves out of other species. Its a big thing about them.
 * You are right about that other point though concerning the mozgriken and how the illithid treat them, I probably would have removed it myself today. You are also right that the part about Oryndoll was an assumption due to the fact that Oryndoll built the colony.Edit: Ahh I see what you mean now. I meant svirneblin, not halflings(halflings have at least 2 subraces last I looked - not gnomes which are what svirfneblin are).Gem Hound (talk) 16:04, November 19, 2015 (UTC)