Talk:Elemental Plane of Fire

This article is great work. In relation to this article's nomination for featured article status at Forum:Nominated Feature Articles, I had two questions.

In the preamble in the following text:
 * "Fire is one of the four elements and two energies that make up the known universe[12] and, more than any other element, has fascinated sentient beings since the beginning of time. The flickering of a candle, the spark of a flint and steel, or the dying embers of a campfire, all have the potential to grow and engulf the world in flame—can a drop of water, a breath of air, or a mote of dust do the same?"

I was wondering if there was a citation for this, and if it could be better related to the Plane of Fire itself? It ends on talk about water, air and dust that don't relate to the fire plane. Perhaps something about the importance of the plane to the Realms would be better?

The line: "The language spoken by the natives was called Ignan and it resembled the hisses and clicks of green wood being consumed by a burning campfire." is cited to the Manual of the Planes 3rd edition, but the source doesn't mention the bit about burning wood. It's cool though (or should I say hot?). Should there be another cite for this? — BadCatMan (talk) 14:24, February 14, 2013 (UTC)


 * Both of those quotes are my attempt to bring some mental imagery to the subject without plagerizing the source material. The rhetorical question in the first paragraph was intended to reinforce the assertion that people are facinated with fire and related this article to the other Elemental Planes articles. I claim poetic license. The reference about Ignan is so short that it would be hard to defend against a plagerism claim, so I made up an example that hopefully conveys the same idea.&mdash;Moviesign (talk) 14:40, February 14, 2013 (UTC)