Talk:Sundabar

NPOV
In my opinion the word "mighty" is biased towards promoting the subject of the article and should be substituted or removed. I am in two minds about the term "dwarven-born" because it doesn't really accurately account the process of creating a fortress. Fw190a8 16:27, 28 July 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for making those changes. I think it reads a lot more neutral now! Fw190a8 22:12, 28 July 2007 (UTC)