Talk:Queen of Air and Darkness

Issues and questions
This article is has been... difficult. I have a few questions concerning some things.

First off, the last sentence of the "Relations" section says, "However, after the Sundering the Queen of Air and Darkness was merely impersonating Auril so as to gain more followers on Toril." This is unclear, at least to me. It feels like it should be "after the Sundering it was dicsovered that the Queen of Air and Darkness...", which would explain why she is now known in the Realms; as it is, it implies that she began impersonating Auril at the Sundering, which doesn't make sense. Either way, could someone with access to the source please rephrase it to be more clear?

Second, how thorough should the information on her avatar be? It is given a complete statblock, etcetera, in Monster Mythology. Should I make a section for it (and possibly add the Creature template) and describe what it could do?

Third, should we make an article about the Black Diamond? It is a major artifact intrinsically tied to the Queen's history in 2e, with mention in 3e and 5e. However, information on it is scarce, to say the least, and is always in conjunction with information on the Queen.

Any answers or comments are welcome. Anyone who wants to help with this article is welcome to do so; I am not the best writer and this article is a bit more important than I normally edit. Have a good day.--SilverTiger (talk) 15:10, September 10, 2020 (UTC)


 * For Question #2, the Deity infobox has class1e, class2e, etc. parameters for describing avatars using the Class table. The description of the avatar's abilities should go in an Abilities section. See Waukeen for example. Hope that helps. :) &mdash;Moviesign (talk) 15:41, September 10, 2020 (UTC)