Talk:Halisstra Melarn

Qilué did not try to kill Halisstra
Qilué did not try to kill Halisstra, because she was timefrozen, caused by a spell of Laeral Silverhand. Halisstra found the frozen Qilué and took her to the ancient Tempel, where she got holod of the Crescent Blade and then tried to kill Qilué with it. In this moment Eilistraee took hold of her and talked to the Lady Penitent. (Historicus 11:20, 10 July 2008 (UTC))


 * OK, I was just cleaning up language from the original edit. I actually haven't read Storm of the Dead, or the Ascendency of the Last, as my bookstore never has them.  So, fill me in:


 * Halisstra helps Cavatina slay Selvetarm, right? I remember that part.  What did she do next?  You say Laeral Silverhand used a timestop spell on Qilue?  Why?  Did she know of the possession by Wendonai?


 * Help me out here, and we can make this update together!


 * I have tried to write this part of the story in the article to Wendonai and Skye cleaned the language up. So maybe you can take a look there, my English is not so good to write a whole story down. It is easier to read them. (Historicus 19:04, 10 July 2008 (UTC))


 * I updated the story. Please check for accuracy.   20:10, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

That's awesome. A nice writeup for a very tortured character. Gotta feel a little sympathy for her. Who put the pic from the book there? Nice! And Historicus, I originally cleaned up the language (sorry, ingrained habit), but Skye filled in the rest of the blanks. Thanks to both of you!


 * I put the pic there, its the same i used in the german article. I've it from the wallpapers at www.wizards.com. I like it more as a picture for the character than using only the cover of a novel. Historicus 10:46, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

Referencing
Seeing as there's a lot of activity on this article lately, and it has been fleshed out nicely, perhaps some time could be spent introducing accurate in-text citations? See Help:Citing sources for more in-depth information, but the aim is to provide concrete sources for everything in the article. Shining Plains and Kobold are good examples of well-cited articles. Fw190a8 20:01, 12 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I will do that within the next days. I am not at home, so I do not have the novels here. Historicus 09:48, 13 July 2008 (UTC)