Talk:Derendil

Phrasing
Quick note of sentence phrasing. The wording of these opening sentences for all of these articles dealing with the Rage of Demons sounds funny.

Saying "Derendil was a quaggoth during the Rage of Demons" makes it sound like the character was a quaggoth only during that time.

Changing the phrase to this (or something similar) sounds better: "Derendil was a quaggoth inhabiting the Underdark during the Rage of Demons." Artemaz (talk) 14:54, January 4, 2016 (UTC)

Yes, you were right Artemaz, I want add more in the profile description but at last I had no idea in mind and I no considered the that sounded crazy