User talk:Tsammarco

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Eilistraee
Hi, thanks for your edits to Eilistraee; it's going to take a long time to go over them. I have one request or bit of advice: please don't make an edit, then publish, then make an edit, then publish, and so on. Today's 25 edits are excessive and rather a chore to go through. Use the preview option to see how the page looks before you publish. Another technique is to work in a Word file, make all the edits you want there, revise them, then transfer the text over and publish. It saves a lot of work. — BadCatMan (talk) 02:27, June 5, 2015 (UTC)


 * Another point is please ensure you work in past tense ("Eilistraee was..." etc.) as per our Remove wiki from timeline policy. — BadCatMan (talk) 02:30, June 5, 2015 (UTC)


 * Hello again! Given the huge length of the Eilistraee page, I strongly suggest splitting it into Eilistraee for the goddess as a character and church of Eilistraee for the organization of her followers. That's what I did with Ilmater and church of Ilmater and what we've been developing for other deities. As it is, the article is very overwhelming and unfocused, and lore about the faith swamps lore about Eilistraee as a character. Furthermore, there's a lot of information about individual temples, orders, and characters that isn't essential to the article. It would be more effective to simply list them and link to articles about these.
 * Please respond here to confirm you've received this and understood these requests and suggestions. I've locked the Eilistraee page from further edits to save you from the potential for wasted work. — BadCatMan (talk) 00:57, June 6, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry about the late answer. Should I create a new page regarding the Church of Eilistraee (including rituals and artifacts/magic)? Should that page include the info about the various temples and shrines?

Also, my apologies about the issue concerning multiple edits. --Tsammarco (talk) 01:09, June 6, 2015 (UTC)


 * I would really recommend a second page at this point. The church page would include rituals, and links to artifacts and magic. Important and representative examples of artifacts, items, and magic can be briefly discussed on the church page. I'd prefer only general, descriptive information about temples and shrines on the church page, together with some representative examples to aid discussion. That's what I did with Church_of_Ilmater. A list of important/interesting temples and shrines can be linked to.


 * It would save yourself a bit of effort too. :)


 * I'll remove the lock. — BadCatMan (talk) 03:02, June 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re: I will make the Church of Eilistraee page as soon as possible. So, should the artifacts remain on Eilistraee's page (with links and brief descriptions on the Church page)? Are there any templates that I should use to create the church page? --Tsammarco (talk) 03:20, June 6, 2015 (UTC)


 * Okay. That sounds fine.
 * The Organization template is suitable for making an organization like a church or faith (organized or not). There's a suggested list of section headings there too. I wrote church of Ilmater to fully demonstrate a complete religious organization article. You can also see church of Mystryl, which User:Moviesign wrote along the same lines. Both, I think, are good examples to follow (well, I would say that).
 * If you have any questions or need anything done, we can help out. Given the great amount of lore on Eilistraee and her prominence, you've picked a massive, daunting project to start on, and also one of the most vital. Good luck! — BadCatMan (talk) 04:05, June 6, 2015 (UTC)

Aargh. I discovered that some passages of the Eilistraee article had been copied from Demihuman Deities – not by you, thankfully, but by old anons. I've removed some (the description and personality), and marked others that seemed more enmeshed with original text. If you like, feel free to check these against the source and rewrite these in your own words. If not, I'll redo them as part of my copy-edit. — BadCatMan (talk)


 * Hi there. I think I've more-or-less finished working on the Eilistraee article, short of future copy-edits and straightening things up. It's now quite a smooth and impressive piece, thanks to you and everyone else who's worked on it. It was nice working with you. I'd like to propose it as a featured article, for showing on the main page. Do you have anything more to add to it?


 * One thing it could do with is a short summary of Eilistraee, her history, personality, and purpose, to go in the opening introduction, more than there is already? Would you like to write that?


 * It'll also need some more pictures to illustrate the article; let me know if you know of any. I prefer official artwork, but fan art with permission is acceptable. — BadCatMan (talk) 13:13, August 10, 2015 (UTC)

Aking for cooperation--Saya222 (talk) 11:30, July 18, 2016 (UTC)
Dear Tsammarco,

I’m Saya222. The talk page of Vhaeraun’s page has told me that two people worked on the page and that you were the other one besides me.

First, I need to thank you for editing the page in adding lore, making the page more sightly both in the orderly manner like paragraphs and also in the language section but most importantly in making the page more neutral and thus more informative.

The talk page has told me to divide the work between us, may I ask whether you are interested? I’m asking because I like the character and his troupe and while I try to be neutral, but fact is I word the content in more or less favoring manner. I realized it always on the next day or after you edited it. Added to this comes the fact that you know more, for example I really thought Eilistraee just shot Corellon and the arrow was not directed by Lolth. And most importantly your language and writing style are clearly better than mine, I realize that I translate directly from Japanese sometimes and also have yet to learn to order in paragraphs.

Please reply to this and thank you again

Best Regards

Saya222 Saya222 (talk) 11:30, July 18, 2016 (UTC)


 * Hello, Saya222.


 * I'd be happy to work with you on the oage about Vhaeraun and his followers. I understand the difficulty to be neutral, since Eilistraee and Vhaeraun are my favourite deities in the Forgotten Realms (Eilistraee means a lot to me, but I also *really* like Vhaeraun, and was very pleased to see them working together in 5e), so there's no problem with that.


 * I also understand the difficulty with language, as I am a non native speaker too, and I too have troubles with idioms and forms (although translating from Japanese must be surely harder than transalting from Italian).


 * That said, BadCatMan suggested to split the page in two articles, one for Vhaeraun, and one for his followers.


 * A Church of Vhaeraun page should include the info that you have added to the deity page (so, composition of the worshipers/clergy, beliefs/dogma, activities, relationships, orders, notable characters). But it should also include lore about rituals, magic items, equipment, centers of worship. The history is mostly the same as that of Vhaeraun himself, but it could use a few adjustments to better emphasize the role of the worshiper themselves. The sections about the Vhaeraunite orders, organizations and the speciality priests should be just brief paragraphs, and redirect to the main pages (in line with the articles that BadCatMan linked).


 * Vhaeraun's page itself is missing sections about his manifestations, powers, and activities. The worshipers section should be reduced to a small summary, and then provide a link to the Church of Vhaeraun page. We could move the info about the holy symbol and the divine realm to sections on their own (the one about the realm should probably be split in subsections about the Great Wheel, World Tree and World Axis cosmologies, to avoid confusion. The 5e, and current cosmology, is a slightly altered version of the Great Wheel).


 * I don't know what books you have access to (I guess that Lords of Darkness, Skullport and Faiths and Pantheons are among them), but Demihuman Deities and The Drow of the Underdark (both 2e) include a much more complete writeup of the deity and his church, so they should also be mined for lore.


 * Again, I'd be happy to work with you.


 * Best regards,
 * Tommaso


 * PS: I think that we should move the conversation to the Vhaeraun Talk Page (in fact, I'll copy-paste all of this there)--Tsammarco (talk) 13:55, July 18, 2016 (UTC)