Talk:Vajra Valmeyjar

Hey, thanks for adding the later information to this. I meant to when I started adding the comics, but decided to focus on my existing projects before continuing. There is so much more to add. — BadCatMan (talk) 12:22, November 26, 2014 (UTC)


 * No problem. My only knowledge of VV came from LoI, but then I stumbled upon the comic series and realized how she used to be the star. Yes, a ton to add! ~ Lhynard (talk) 01:07, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

"Vajra found the tavern had grown rather rowdy and stepped into a brawl, but quelled it with her fierce presence." It's a minor thing, but I think it's quite important, illustrating her aura, reputation, and her past as a bouncer there. Can we keep? Hopefully, I'll cut back on the blow-by-blow accounts in the later, more everyday adventures. — BadCatMan (talk) 11:34, April 6, 2015 (UTC)


 * That makes some sense. Do you think it might be worked into the Personality section? Use it as an anecdote to support/show her traits. Something like: "Vajra had an amazing fire of presence; on one occasion, she returned to a bar where she once worked as a bouncer and quelled a brawl underway simply by walking in the room." (I don't know if that's exactly right, since I don't have the comics, but that's the idea.) This would expand the Personality section, which never gets any love in articles, and keep the History section from feeling bloated&mdash; win, win. What do you think? (This is similar to how you noted in the Abilities section how she carried two people up a cliff.) Obviously, it's your call either way, since you have more authority here. :) ~ Lhynard (talk) 14:48, April 6, 2015 (UTC)


 * That also makes sense. Once I get the article more-or-less complete and have a good quantity of these character moments, I'd probably go back and revise it, cut some fat, etc. — BadCatMan (talk) 15:11, April 6, 2015 (UTC)