Talk:Martyred champion of Ilmater

This is my first attempt at creating an article for class, and trying to lay out a modern style for FRW. I followed the format used by other prestige class pages, and tried to expand on it. I think I may have gone a bit too far in attempting to convert the crunch into fluff. Is it too obvious, or not obvious enough? — BadCatMan (talk) 12:52, August 30, 2013 (UTC)