Talk:Nimor Imphraezl

Cleanup
Most parts of this article are not exactly about the topic of the article and should be merged with the article about the Jaezred Chaulssin. There exists also an article about Chaulssin with some of the details, and some correct facts about it and using the right sources. Historicus 20:11, 10 December 2008 (UTC)


 * I have tagged this with cleanup because it needs major attention. Fw190a8 (talk &middot; contr) 19:57, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

It was copied and pasted verbatim from here (http://crpp0001.uqtr.ca/w4/campagne/Downloads/Characters/Character%20Profile%20Nimor%20Imphraezl.htm). I'm reading war of the spider queen again so I'll do my best to start cleaning it up. I know we are supposed to avoid crunch I just wanted to make sure it was ok if I used dragon magazine as a source for his stats? --M Helvi&#39;virr 16:41, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Cleanup #2
Dear editors,

I’m Saya222 and I apologize for causing the problem that made cleanup necessary.

Given this, I gave some thought to what exactly is the problem with it and I think a major problem is that title and content don’t really match up.

For example, the history section describes his history but also his activities. For example "Infiltration of the City of Spiders" is more a description of his activities, the how, and not really about what he did when — the heading is also not a time description. I like to suggest to put the history section apart into history and activities/methods section. For example, the aforementioned "Infiltration of the City of Spiders" subsection could be divided into "Post-Spellplague" and "Methods as Patron" with the former simply saying that he infiltrated Menzoberranzan, became Patron and caused havoc in the Academy and is generally inciting rebellion whereas from a certain point in time onwards and the latter describes which house he infiltrated, how exactly he caused the havoc, how exactly he rouses the emotions and how it fits with his affiliation with his organization.

Please tell me whether this would be a good idea. If nobody objects, I will write my suggestion on the page, during the week-end

Thank you for reading and for advice and suggestions in advance

Best Regards

Saya222 Saya222 (talk) 18:21, August 17, 2016 (UTC)


 * Mostly I tagged it for cleanup in order to improve the language, formatting, and check it for errors. I'm afraid I wasn't able to get to it earlier. Anyway, I had a look now and found it rather confused in the history, with events repeated a few times. I've done the cleanup now, more or less as you described. I put the history in chronological order, separated his general activities into a different section, and made more normal fixes. See what you think, and feel free to make other corrections or clean up as necessary. — BadCatMan (talk) 02:13, August 18, 2016 (UTC)