Talk:Eye Tyrant Wars

Good Article status

 * Correct : yes
 * Referenced : yes
 * Formatted : yes
 * Clean : yes
 * Nearly complete : yes
 * Policy-adherent/Demonstrative : yes

Proofread
Done. I removed a lot of extra links, applied some Yearlink and YearlinkName templates, and did a general proofread. I simplified/shortened some wordy statements, but you might want to restore those if you prefer the earlier wording. Some terms like vizera and raj might need linking to appropriate dictionary pages, but I couldn't find them defined on Alzhedo dictionary.

Otherwise, great work in integrating all that lore. I liked some of the clever wording like "set their many eyes on", "they took up their arms", so I left them intact. BadCatMan (talk) 05:42, 1 June 2021 (UTC)