Talk:Wizshade

I rephrase the article but there are still some samall references that I considered essencial. LMEF2009 (talk) 18:13, November 16, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks, but I believe you can rewrite it further. Changing it to past-tense is not sufficient (but is required). To help you along, try to separate and arrange the information in the various sections given at Person, then rearrange the sentences, then come up with new phrases and descriptions. A dictionary or thesaurus will help you come up with different words. — BadCatMan (talk) 10:06, November 17, 2015 (UTC)


 * I reedit the article, I don't know if it was enough. LMEF2009 (talk) 03:01, November 21, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thank you, I have gone further, rewriting the remaining text that cleaved too closely to the source, and generally overhauled the article. Have a look, especially at the revision history. I deleted the page as per our policy on copied articles, and recreated it with only the most recent versions. — BadCatMan (talk) 07:16, November 21, 2015 (UTC)


 * Thank you so much for your help. LMEF2009 (talk) 09:46, November 21, 2015 (UTC)