Talk:Zallanora Argentresses

Tenses and Grammar
going to be honest, this page confuses the hell out of me. Is it an elf that was possessed by a lich or just one of the liches disguises? the way the characters are talked about is very confusing. Doonval ti bekk&#39;har (talk) 18:18, August 17, 2014 (UTC)


 * As I understand it, Zallanora and Shoon VII switched bodies, so he is running around as a beautiful female elf and she is trapped in the skull and remains of the demilich, which reside in an extra-dimensional pocket inside the back cover of the Tome of the Unicorn. The text was originally written (maybe partially copied) by someone whose first language was not English, so it's not surprising that tense changes are a bit confusing. This article could use some work. &mdash;Moviesign (talk) 21:14, August 17, 2014 (UTC)


 * Yes, the text cleaves quite closely to the source. I recommend it be largely rewritten and divided into two characters: Zallanora Argentresses (the elf maid, in both forms) and Shoon VII (the demilich, in both forms). I've marked it for later clean up. — BadCatMan (talk) 09:34, August 18, 2014 (UTC)